寫作技法點撥系列十、發(fā)揮想象, 靈活闡釋開放作文【核心點撥【核心點撥】常用句型常用句型1. As is shown in the picture, two ants are walking along the side of a standard triangle. 如圖所示如圖所示, 兩只螞蟻正沿著一個標準的三角形而行。兩只螞蟻正沿著一個標準的三角形而行。2. As we can see in the picture, we are being surrounded by deserts. 正如圖中我們看到的那樣正如圖中我們看到的那樣, 我們我們正在被沙漠包圍。正在被沙漠包圍。3. In the picture, we can see clearly the struggle between people and desert. 如圖所示如圖所示, 我們可以清楚地看出人類與沙漠之間的較量。我們可以清楚地看出人類與沙漠之間的較量。4. The picture is trying to tell us that. . . 這幅圖畫向我們表明這幅圖畫向我們表明5. The picture reflects a common social problem that. . . 這幅圖畫反映了一個普遍的社會問題這幅圖畫反映了一個普遍的社會問題, 即即【典題示例【典題示例】(2016浙江高考浙江高考)“Planning is good, but doing is better”是一句英是一句英語名言。請以此為題用英語寫一篇語名言。請以此為題用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文。詞左右的短文。要求如下要求如下: 1. 簡述你對這句名言的理解簡述你對這句名言的理解; 2. 用一個具體事例加以說明用一個具體事例加以說明; 3. 給出恰當?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。給出恰當?shù)慕Y(jié)尾?！緦忣}謀篇【審題謀篇】文章體裁文章體裁夾敘夾議文夾敘夾議文中心人稱中心人稱第一人稱第一人稱I主要時態(tài)主要時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時一般現(xiàn)在時, 一般過去時一般過去時信息要點信息要點1. 解釋這句名言的含義解釋這句名言的含義; 2. 用自己的具體事例加以說明用自己的具體事例加以說明; 3. 這句名言的意義及我的感受。這句名言的意義及我的感受。【詞句構建【詞句構建】1. 詞匯詞匯漢語漢語一般詞匯一般詞匯高級詞匯高級詞匯沒有好結(jié)果沒有好結(jié)果have no good effect_一個恰當?shù)囊粋€恰當?shù)睦永觓 proper/good example_開始開始start/begin_完成任務完成任務finish onestask_bear no fruita case in pointset outachieve onessuccess2. 句式句式如果不去實際實施如果不去實際實施, 一個計劃不會有好結(jié)果。一個計劃不會有好結(jié)果。一般表達一般表達: A plan can have no good effect if it is not actually carried out. 高級表達高級表達: A plan can _actually carried out. (用高級詞匯句式替代用高級詞匯句式替代have no good effect, if從句從句)bear no fruit without being我最終取得了比賽的第一名。我最終取得了比賽的第一名。一般表達一般表達: Finally I won the first prize in the contest. 高級表達高級表達: I finally _the first prize winner. (用高級詞匯替代用高級詞匯替代won)came out of the contest as它它(好結(jié)果好結(jié)果)來自計劃周密和執(zhí)行到位的完美結(jié)合。來自計劃周密和執(zhí)行到位的完美結(jié)合。一般表達一般表達: It came from good planning and better doing which are combined. 高級表達高級表達: It came from good planning and better doing _. (用過去分詞作定語用過去分詞作定語)combined【連句成篇【連句成篇】Planning is good, but doing is betterPlanning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out. My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner. I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined. 【即時應用【即時應用】假設你校英語報正在進行名言佳句分享活動假設你校英語報正在進行名言佳句分享活動, 請根請根據(jù)要求寫一篇英語短文推薦據(jù)要求寫一篇英語短文推薦“Change what you can change; accept what you cant change. ”這句名言。這句名言。1. 談談你對這句名言的理解談談你對這句名言的理解; 2. 舉例說明理由。舉例說明理由。注意注意: 詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100個左右。個左右。_【參考范文【參考范文】Famous sayings usually contain much wisdom and teach us some philosophy of life. “Change what you can change; accept what you cant change. ”is just one such quote. On the one hand, we should be optimistic, think positively and live actively. In other words, we should try our best to change everything around us for the better. One thing Im sure we can change is our attitudes. With a positive attitude, were more likely to achieve our goals and realize our dreams. On the other hand, therere many things in our life which cant be changed, such as our appearance and family background. We have to accept all of these because theres no point in complaining about them.