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2016高考導(dǎo)航 適用于全國(guó)卷 專題七書(shū)面表達(dá) 1 五檔 作文在眼里 抓標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 1 完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù) 2 覆蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 3 應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 4 具備了較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力 5 有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分 使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 6 完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的 2 五檔 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)如何抓 1 抓 應(yīng)用了較多的詞匯 解讀 詞性多樣 詞匯高級(jí) 短語(yǔ)豐富 2 抓 應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu) 解讀 感嘆句 倒裝句 復(fù)合句 強(qiáng)調(diào)句 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu) with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)等 3 抓 有效使用連接成分 解讀 段與段 句與句之間明晰的 合乎邏輯的順序組織與安排 做到文意與結(jié)構(gòu)上層次分明 條理清楚 4 抓 完成規(guī)定的任務(wù) 解讀 對(duì)于題干 要點(diǎn)提示 注意事項(xiàng)以及參考詞匯要做到讀題全面 只有這樣才能確保完成規(guī)定任務(wù) 1 力保審題過(guò)程要 全 審題五方面 審題是高考書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵第一步 確保審題 全而不漏 是得高分的基本保證 審題要注意以下五個(gè)方面 1 審文體考生首先要根據(jù)情景提示弄清要求寫哪種體裁的文章 是記敘文 說(shuō)明文 應(yīng)用文 還是議論文 動(dòng)筆之前認(rèn)真審題并確定寫作體裁是至關(guān)重要的 3 審人稱審人稱 即弄清書(shū)面表達(dá)要求用哪種人稱寫作 其中有主要人稱和次要人稱 這一點(diǎn)要引起考生足夠的重視 因?yàn)樘热羧朔Q不對(duì) 評(píng)卷時(shí)閱卷老師就會(huì)扣掉相應(yīng)的分?jǐn)?shù) 4 審時(shí)態(tài)審時(shí)態(tài) 即根據(jù)所給材料信息確定短文的基本時(shí)態(tài) 考生一定要重視時(shí)態(tài) 因?yàn)槿绻麜r(shí)態(tài)方面的錯(cuò)誤過(guò)多 評(píng)卷時(shí)閱卷老師就會(huì)扣除3 5分 5 審要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出全部要點(diǎn)是得分的基本保證 如果漏掉要點(diǎn) 得分檔次就會(huì)被降低 因此考生要細(xì)審題 定要點(diǎn) 巧構(gòu)思 列提綱 2 精準(zhǔn)規(guī)避三類錯(cuò)誤 錯(cuò)在各類詞匯A 拼寫錯(cuò)誤a 誤 Wegotstruckinthetrafficjamsowewerelateforthemeeting 改正 struck改為stuckB 變化錯(cuò)誤b 誤 Peoplethrowedcans paper bagsandsoonintotheriverwater 改正 throwed改為threwc 誤 Thebookpresentsusalotofusefulinformations 改正 informations改為information C 詞性錯(cuò)誤d 誤 Duringmysummervacation Ispenthalfamonthinthecountryandplayedveryhappy 改正 happy改為happilye 誤 Doingapart timejobalwayseffectsstudy 改正 effects改為affects 錯(cuò)在語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)A 時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤a 誤 Inthemorning wehadbicycledinthesuburbstoplanttrees 改正 had bicycled改為bicycled B 語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤b 誤 Childrenwhoraiseinpoorfamiliescangenerallydealwithproblemsmoreeffectivelyintheiradultyears 改正 raise改為areraisedC 主謂一致錯(cuò)誤c 誤 Myhobbyiswidespread whichincludedrawing collectingstampsandsoon 改正 include改為includes D 比較級(jí)使用錯(cuò)誤d 誤 Withthedevelopmentoftransportation theworldseemstobegettingmoreandmoresmaller 改正 moreandmoresmaller改為smallerandsmallerE 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使用錯(cuò)誤e 誤 Comparingwithothercountries thecountrypayslittleattentiontothepollution 改正 Comparing改為Compared F 平行錯(cuò)誤f 誤 ThenIputmybookundermydesk openingitandstartedlookingfortheanswer 改正 opening改為opened 錯(cuò)在漢式思維A 純漢語(yǔ)式思維和漢語(yǔ)式語(yǔ)序a 誤 Atthisschoolstudying Ireallyveryhappy 改正 Studyinginthisschool Iamreallyhappy B 句子成分殘缺b 誤 Therearemanystudentsdon tsupporttheproject 改正 Therearemanystudentswhodon tsupporttheproject c 誤 Ontheotherhand dogsareourbestfriends bringusalotoffun 改正 Ontheotherhand dogsareourbestfriends whichbringusalotoffun C 句子成分贅余d 誤 Ononeday hewenttothecinema 改正 Oneday hewenttothecinema 1 運(yùn)用三大原則 體現(xiàn)美不勝收 1 新穎性原則寫作時(shí)恰當(dāng)?shù)皿w地使用高中學(xué)過(guò)的 別人可能想不到的詞匯 會(huì)給閱卷人耳目一新的感覺(jué) 但是需注意 既要避免使用俗詞 又要避開(kāi)冷僻詞匯 2014 高考江西卷 Inthecomingthreeyears ourschoollifewillbedifficult Inthecomingthreeyears ourschoollifewillbechallenging 2 短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則多使用詞組 習(xí)語(yǔ)來(lái)代替一些單詞 以增加文采 2014 高考江西卷 Developingagoodhabitisalsoimportant Developingagoodhabitisalsoofimportance 3 避免重復(fù)原則盡量避免過(guò)多地使用某一個(gè)單詞 必要時(shí)選擇使用其他恰當(dāng)?shù)耐x詞或詞組來(lái)代替 Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingfootballmatches Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingfootballmatches 2 頻變句型結(jié)構(gòu) 增加得分亮點(diǎn) 1 肯定不如雙否好對(duì)于考生來(lái)說(shuō) 只要稍加注意 在文章中運(yùn)用雙重否定的句子可以給自己的書(shū)面表達(dá)加分 2014 高考重慶卷 Wecanimaginewhatlifewouldbelikewithphones Wecan timaginewhatlifewouldbelikewithoutphones 2 陳述不如倒裝妙倒裝是一種最簡(jiǎn)單易行的使句子呈現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)的方法 它能使文章內(nèi)容突出 富有節(jié)奏 Thelibraryliesinthecenterofourschool Thelibraryisbetweenthegardenandtheteachingbuilding Inthecenterofourschoolliesthelibrary whichisbetweenthegardenandtheteachingbuilding 2014 高考福建卷 IwassoexcitedthatIcouldn twaittotrymyhandatridingit SoexcitedwasIthatIcouldn twaittotrymyhandatridingit 3 主動(dòng)不如被動(dòng)巧使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣 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Thereisnodenyingthatsuccessfulbusinessliesinahealthybodyandmind Itiswellknownthatanelephantisaverykindandgentleanimal I mexcitedtolearnthatwearegoingtostartamagazine 3 滿分作文選粹 2015 高考湖南卷 Asastudent Icantellyouthatthereisnothingbetterthanbeingpraisedbymyteacherbeforemyclassmates 2014 高考天津卷 I mgladtohearthatyouwillcometoourschoolasanexchangestudent 2014 高考湖南卷 Asisknowntoall shoesplayanimportantroleinourlife foritcanprotectourfeetfrombeinghurt 2 承 好上下 1 常用順承詞匯Secondly weshouldgetupearlytomemorizeidiomsandusefulexpressions Obviously agoodlearninghabitcanhelpustospeeduptoreachourdestinations What smore goodbookscanhelpustodevelopgoodcharacters Ilostmywayintheforestandtomakemattersworse whatisworse itbecamedark Inaddition weshouldn tneglectthateveryonewantsafriendlyandpeacefulsociety Meanwhile Atthesametime Iwillregarditasmydutytokeepourenvironmentclean 2 常用順承句式TakeBeijingforexample itisoneoftheoldestcitiesintheworld Whatismoreseriousisthatwedon tcherishwildlife AsfarasIamconcerned 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